 hueseph
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Date: August 13, 2006 @ 1:06 AM
Ok. The concept is there. The excecution could be a bit better. I like the solo. Not too far beyond your ability. Still it could be refined a bit more. Either you need to add some vox or you need to develop more on the melody.
My two bits: make sure that everything you play sounds intentional. That is, each note should have a purpose. Each note should lead the listener to the direction you intend. I think overall you accomplish that. You just need to do some refining.
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